{"id":176281,"date":"2018-03-08T09:37:06","date_gmt":"2018-03-08T09:37:06","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/blog.soton.ac.uk\/uosm2008\/?p=176281"},"modified":"2018-03-08T09:37:06","modified_gmt":"2018-03-08T09:37:06","slug":"feedback-from-topic-1","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blog.soton.ac.uk\/uosm2008\/2018\/general-feedback\/2018\/03\/feedback-from-topic-1\/","title":{"rendered":"Feedback from Topic 1"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>The standard of work for this topic was generally good and the use of visual elements, many self-produced, has improved too. Hoping to see more self-produced videos in the next topic though. It was great to see the use of H5P by Tom Davidson and Tom Rowledge &#8211; well done.<\/p>\n<p><strong>General Comments<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>It is important to research widely and deeply into the topic and then apply a critical mind to the question. Too many people missed important aspects of the topic, or just described what digital differences are rather than evaluating their impact on individual&#8217;s life chances.<\/p>\n<p>There needs to be a general improvement in\u00a0<strong>reflective writing skills<\/strong>, make use of the guides I provided for you during the compulsory session we had on this a couple of weeks ago, or use your network learning skills to find some good sources to help you improve.<\/p>\n<p>A few people <strong>failed to complete the self-assessment<\/strong> before the deadline &#8211; remember, you MUST do this for every topic.<\/p>\n<p>A lot of people failed to reference the MOOC correctly (or at all) in the reference list. <strong>The MOOC will remain accessible to you all for this week and next, but will then close.<\/strong> It will open again in April once we return from the Easter break.<\/p>\n<p>Too many blog posts and reflection pieces seem to just&#8230;.stop. It is important to have a proper conclusion (even if it is only a single sentence) which draws together your argument \/ narrative\u00a0 \/ reflections effectively.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Stars of the Week<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/sineadboyle376.wordpress.com\/\">Sinead Boyle<\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/uosmanna.wordpress.com\">Anna Filipek\u00a0<\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/honghnguyen.wordpress.com\/\">Hong Hanh Nguyen<\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/tompaterson.info\">Tom Paterson<\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/phoebetaylor55.wordpress.com\">Phoebe Taylor<\/a><\/p>\n<p>Honourable mentions to: Emily Dekkers, Tom Pethick and Tuesday Topping<\/p>\n<p>Good work by all those mentioned in this post.<\/p>\n<p>BUT, think you can do better? 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