As we discussed in the Live session earlier, here are a few points of general feedback on your Introductory posts:
There’s no need to repeat back what we’ve already given to you – focus on taking the discussion further (by means of an update, or provide a different perspective, or compare with examples from your own experience)
Make sure that all the substantive points you make are evidenced and that you’ve provided the specific reference for this.
Language – blogging is informal but there is no excuse (ever!) for using terms like “gonna” or “gotten” or “kinda”…
Make sure you credit the original source of all images (not just that it came from “google”) and that its re-use is allowed.
Make sure you included your actual self test results! You will need them at the end of the module for comparison purposes in your final assessment.
Monday’s Live session can be accessed here – have a lovely weekend J